So Here is what I've done with the script finishing a bit of the prologue so it sort of connects and writing the second act. I'm really unsure about the end of the second act and the recurring scene with It was my fault, I'm also unsure about the dialogue used in the scene before that. I want to workshop if it works and if not try it purely through physical and gesture.
Anyway here's the word version and I've cut the prologue for this stage.
So I've made the changes that we have been working on, the last section remains untouched because we haven't really got there yet. There are a couple of comments which I just chucked there as I was typing.
Anyway here's the word version and I've cut the prologue for this stage.
So I've made the changes that we have been working on, the last section remains untouched because we haven't really got there yet. There are a couple of comments which I just chucked there as I was typing.
This is the original script/score and all kind of material collected during first stage of process
Sorry bout all the drafts and killing trees but here's where i will put the third draft
Here is the third draft sorry about the delay and confusion
So I have edited all that we covered yesterday and here is the updated script